A few days ago, I learnt how to make a formal email, especially for an application letter. I got a lot of revisions because of my bad grammar. But I tried to fix it. Here is the result
The draft
The revision
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Hello, Fanni.
BalasHapusWow, you're very diligent and hard working. I see some notes are written in the draft. Keep on improving!
Yeah, I made some of them so I could remember all the time when I open them ahhahaha. Thank you, Angel!
HapusHi, Fanny. You've worked hard! Your application letter has helped me enough. It's easy to understand. Keep trying and learning!
BalasHapusOh, is it? Thank you anyway, Tiara! :)
HapusHi Fanny!
BalasHapusBe careful when writing emails, you need to pay attention to word choices . But you, already fixed it. Good job Fanny!
Thank you for correcting me, Shafa!:)
Hapus