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Draft Formal Email

A few days ago, I learnt how to make a formal email, especially for an application letter. I got a lot of revisions because of my bad grammar. But I tried to fix it. Here is the result

The draft


The revision


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  1. Babiy20 Desember 2018 pukul 07.08

    Hello, Fanni.
    Wow, you're very diligent and hard working. I see some notes are written in the draft. Keep on improving!

    BalasHapus
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    1. Fannisya Aulya Iskandar20 Desember 2018 pukul 08.22

      Yeah, I made some of them so I could remember all the time when I open them ahhahaha. Thank you, Angel!

      Hapus
  2. Unknown20 Desember 2018 pukul 07.15

    Hi, Fanny. You've worked hard! Your application letter has helped me enough. It's easy to understand. Keep trying and learning!

    BalasHapus
  3. Unknown21 Desember 2018 pukul 06.29

    Hi Fanny!
    Be careful when writing emails, you need to pay attention to word choices . But you, already fixed it. Good job Fanny!

    BalasHapus

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