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Draft of Personal Messages (condolences, birthday, celebration)

I learnt to write some personal messages

The draft

The revision



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  1. Hi Fanny! Your personal note is good, simple, and I like reading it. You must be careful when writing text. You need to pay attention to the punctuation mark. No problem, this is good. Keep the spirit of learning Fanny! :)

    BalasHapus
  2. Hello, Fanni.
    You chose good expressions that fit with the situation. Don't stop, you're doing a great job!

    BalasHapus
  3. Hi, Fanny. It's nice to read and learn personal messages from your blog. It's easy to understand and simple. You did a great job! Keep trying, keep learning, let's learn together!

    BalasHapus

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