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Draft Postcard

The draft

The postcard


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  1. Unknown16 Oktober 2018 pukul 08.06

    Hi Fanny! I'm Tiara. Glad to read it! So simple but good, the layout is great and also the punctuation. Hope you will more careful about the punctuation on your next post. Let's learn together! Keep writing!

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    1. Fannisya Aulya Iskandar16 Oktober 2018 pukul 14.57

      Hi, Tiara! Thanks for the feedback! I hope so, and let's learn together! :)

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  2. Unknown16 Oktober 2018 pukul 08.40

    Hi Fanny! Your postcard is good, simple, and I like reading it. You must be careful when writing text. You need to pay attention to the punctuation mark. No problem, this is good. Keep the spirit of learning Fanny! :)

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    1. Fannisya Aulya Iskandar16 Oktober 2018 pukul 14.58

      Hi, Shafa! Thanks for the feedback. Ah you're right, sometimes I do forget about the punctuation and I still learn about it. Thank you! :)

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  3. Babiy19 Oktober 2018 pukul 16.46

    Hi Fanny! It's very simple postcard. You forgot the full stop at the end of your sentence but you've figured it out. Nice work!

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